Angel of Death

James Franco is to die for, but oh have I got a list: 1. Johnny Depp (I'd marry him in a heartbeat) 2. Orlando Bloom 3. Colin Ferrell 4. Simon ...

MilaScribbler Thanks for your critique. I'll surely take your suggestion into consideration but I like the way it is formatted, but we shall see. Ha, I wasn't sure anybody would ...

Hey there krupp! Well, I really liked this. I'm a sucker for dark things because I think that people tend to write too many happy stories and poems too much ...

Hey there! Well, first off, I didn't read this but I skimmed through this and I can see the problems. First, if you're going to use a rhyme scheme keep ...

Yay! You've posting something new and it was lovely! Everyone already got to the grammatical errors and such, so I'm only here to lend compliments. This was really unique and ...

Hello! So since you reviewed something of mine, I thought I'd take a look at this. So I liked the idea and I felt that it was really creative but ...

Hello there! So, altogether, this poem is really good but if you rip this apart into many stanzas, it's not so good. I think this is bland and the message ...

Hey Ash! I'm so sorry for taking so long to get to this. But since all of the grammatical stuff is taken care of, I'll just say that I liked ...

Oreorulez21401 Thanks a lot for your review. I wasn't sure it would be good because usually when I write something off the top of my head, it is not really ...

Note: This was just written off the top of my head. It actually has a meaning, can you guess what it is? All critiques are welcomed and appreciated. Thanks!! The ...

Hey there Jiggy! Wow, so this was written well for a first draft. You made it seem like it was beyond horrible but nothing you write is, so I don't ...

Hey Clo! Wow, it seems I haven't read anything of yours in a long long time. But I liked this though I think it just needs a little bit more ...

Mr. Darcy! He's flipping delicious. Englishmen with accents are beyond sexy. Amen to that. Accents are too sexy to be called sexy.

Hey Merry! Time. It comes in different forms, shapes and sizes. We can't see it or feel it. Instead, imagine it pass through our fingers as we grow up. It's ...

yeah yeah yeah. i wanted the cardinals to win. the steelers have already been to enough superbowls! give someone else a chance! this was the first football game i've actually ...